The Storm

Lightning

Microfiction

Lightening cracked open the sky, and thunder shook the earth again. The storm was on top of them. Most of the men and women were outside now, even though it was the middle of the night. The wind was getting stronger and was playing havoc with the flaps, so the people were busy closing them, tightening the lodge poles with more lashes, and gathering in what they could. Anything they could not grab was tossed into the air like leaves. Children were crying, mothers were screaming, and the men were busy giving commands which were never heard.

A few of the men tried tending to the horses, which were panic stricken. Herding them into a small space worked well in spite of the noise. Another crack, and more rumbling from below. It seemed as if the earth might break open, with the shaking. The men stayed with the horses as long as they could, until the rain started. It was a hard rain, and everyone went inside. In spite of the wind, the lodges stood throughout the storm.

No one could sleep. Young lovers took advantage of the time, parents held their children, and some worried about the damage to the village. Would the horses return? They would have to wait until morning to see.

There was one person that was not awake or asleep. He went to live in the spirit world that night, and left his body behind. Lone Horse had been an old man, and he was loved by the people. He had wisdom from the Creator, and usually after a council meeting people would say – Lone Horse thinks….or Lone Horse says…Now there would be an empty seat at the council meetings. It was a great loss for all the people.

His wife, Cricket in the Meadow, would not find him until morning. They had been married for more than fifty years, and the people would worry if she could survive the loss. Her health was frail, but fortunately there was still the sparkle of light in her eyes. They had had only one child, and he died at a young age from the fever. They carried this pain for the rest of their lives, but it gave them both a vulnerability, a sensitivity, that brought out love in all that they did. The people would wrap their arms around her, holding her tight, enveloping her with their love, for as long as she needed. They would get through this somehow, together. Still, it was a dark time.

 

  Night Storm

 Writing © Copyright 2014, nicodemasplusthree

8 thoughts on “The Storm

  1. Sad but so much history and depth in that post…
    Amazing writing.
    Sad for Lone Horse, but he lived his life,living a huge heritage in his people, nature…

  2. Awh this is sad. The first thing I thought is what kind of protection from a storm is a teepee! How crazy! Not even like a mobile home! I can image a storm would be very scary! I love this story! 😄

    1. Thanks MichelleMarie! My understanding is that they were actually pretty sturdy due to their shape, and the way the lodge poles were positioned. The next story will highlight Cricket in the Meadow!

  3. Very well written story. I could feel the fear the people were experiencing. I imagine how I would have felt in their place and its frightful. What a pity Lone Horse left his wife for ever that same night. Happily he would be remembered by his people for long for the way he lived. I really want to appreciate your writing Nicodemas. It’s captivating.

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