So many words spoken over us, at times unseen
as if they gently rested
on our shoulders, whispering
into our spirits, both
hawks and doves,
so that in our peace we can
pull down every particle of grey
and black smoke
drifting,
creeping in from our ruined history.
Until finally
there is enough glory
to write a poem,
pulled down
from the sky.
Poetry and Image © Copyright 2017, ancient skies
You certainly found enough glory to write an excellent poem.
Wow, thank you for your wonderful comment! Peace to you and blessings.
You are welcome.
Very well written poem
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Brilliant
Thank you Morgan! I’m blessed by your comment. Peace to you and wonderful blessings.
Another beauty of a poem!
Thank you Betty for your encouragement! Peace to you and blessings.
Nicely crafted
Thank you so much! Peace and blessings to you.
My pleasure, keep on blessing us with your marvelous pieces
Peace to you.
Literally “pulled down” from heaven. Exceptionally beautiful!
Thank you Denise! Your comments are a blessing! Peace and have a wonderful week.
Beautiful!
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Spirit filled words Nico 🍀
Thank you Karen for your wonderful comment! Peace to you and great blessings.
Pretty sweet…..takes on a journey…..similarly….I often feel like an antennae receiving signals….the art is to ‘pull it down as you say’….. ex nihil….exnihilio…..something from nothing….almost…..we create…Thanks…littleraventhepoet.blog….
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments! Peace to you and blessings.
Hawks and doves……and a raven sometimes
Yes for sure! Thank you, peace to you and blessings.
Grains Of Sand……Did you leave your silken throne in heaven….for an earthly mission….BOUND?…Did you come to ordain my eyes to see ?…..my ears amplify for sound?….I know you left your Fathers mansion…winding streets of gold…to come and wear a thorny crown….I know you’re higher than the angels….super natural God…beyond the clouds…..my need is that you’re super-other….sent from the all high hand…..to come and dance on my ocean….and remove the Grains Of Sand…..from my eyes….littleraventhepoet….or Coy Payton…(Frank)…..my first just above vanity publishing was called Inner Skies…FYI…only mention in passing…..love your Ancient Skies…name….
Thank you for your wonderful comments and your amazing poem! So do you prefer Coy or Frank? Peace to you and great blessings.
Hello…..I guess Frank…..Coy is my legal name…..but I’m not really a Coy….it was my dads and his fathers name……im neither of them….. I am interested in writers….like you….who have a different connection….and something in common…..the higher language of Poetry…..not that I think …I….or me and you….or any poet is BETTER….because I don’t……just different……”Birds Of A Feather”….comes to mind…..if I may….how long have you been writing…..how many pieces of work….?….
Thank you Frank. I write alot, so on this site there are thousands but I’ve writing for many years. Peace and have a great weekend.
I guess I want to offer a bit of an insight into my writing…..because you will find some …what might be called CONTROVERSIAL….pieces in my work….controversial in the sense of ….should and why would a professing…Christian write of some matters?…..I had a dear friend ask me the same years ago…..my reply was….I try not to filter it out as it comes….maybe I should….but I don’t…..I went on to say that…..’just because I write about something and it might be perceived as how I really feel or believe about something…doesn’t mean I really do or feel as expressed…..maybe I am trying to say…..its something I have observed….any way keep writing…..Frank……furher something I have observed and is out there….
Thank you Frank! I think I can understand this. There are times I would like to write a certain way but don’t. In my case I do put the filters on. Peace to you and be blessed.
I have boundaries….but I keep the funnel….open
Thank you so much! Peace and blessings to you.
Wow
Thank you Dalia for your great comment! Peace and beautiful blessings.