Her eyes hung heavy, as a few final snowflakes drifted
swirling, she squinted with the new dawn
breaking, covering the sky.
She was startled hearing His voice
the Creator asking,
her again to pray,
for the humans.
Couldn’t they just hunt mice
and be happy?
Poetry © Copyright 2017, ancient skies
Image from hdwallpapers
Rivers Renewed 
Nice ending brought a smile to my face. Well done
Thank you Joseph! Peace to you and blessings. Have a wonderful week.
Lovely poem!Ilove it.
Thank you so much! Peace to you and wonderful blessings.
Lovely, wouldn’t it be wonderful.
Thank you Holly! Yes, I’m not sure we would hunt for mice though! Lol. Peace to you and yours and be blessed.
Great thoughts .
Thank you! I had fun writing it. Peace to you and blessings.
very pleasant and refreshing poem.
In friendship
Michel
Thank you Michel! Peace to you my friend, and your family, and great blessings.
Lovely
Thank you Morgan! I’m blessed by your comments. Peace to you and wonderful blessings.
Blessings
Gorgeous creature!
Yes, for sure! Thank you Cindy. Peace to you and blessings.
Fascinating species it is!
Yes it is! Thank you Alok. Peace to you and be blessed.
Beautiful post 🙂
Thank you Irene! Peace to you and have a wonderful week.
Thank you and peace for you and yours.
This says so much about somr of the mindless activities i insist on engaging in every day. Itcalso says so much about the rut i often get stuck in regarding what i need f5o be happy.
Thank you for your insight comments! May you continue to seek peace. Peace to you and wonderful blessings.
Very good analogy, Nicodemas!!
Thank you Erika! Peace my friend, and great blessings to you.
Thank you and peace and blessings to you, Nico 😃
“She was startled hearing His voice … ” Love this!
Thank you Lois! It was fun to write! Peace to you and wonderful blessings.
‘Couldn’t they just hunt mice and be happy?’ ! Nice
Thank you so much! Peace to you and wonderful blessings.
Aww I liked your poem🙂
Thank you so much! I like this one too. Peace to you and have a wonderful weekend.
Thank you so much! Peace to you and blessings.