Snow and ice crunching under his boots, and a strange gray reflection
rippling across the creek, with deer tracks on the other side.
He paused, zipping up his coat a little further,
watching the trees bend.
He remembered traveling through time
hunting for visions with bows
wearing buckskin
and an occasional feather,
but it was long ago
on horseback,
so instead, in his reflection
by the creek,
he took some pictures.
Poetry and Image © Copyright 2018, ancient skies
Beautiful writing!
Thank you Vikash! Peace to you and be blessed.
Thank you & same to you !
awesome
Thank you Caroline! Peace to you and wonderful blessings.
Amen
You write so beautifully. And your simple words invariably create a beautiful image in my mind. So glad we were able to connect on WordPress! 🙂
Thank you Aishwarya! Your comments are a wonderful blessing. Peace and blessings to you.
This is lovely Nico 🙂 I could have kept reading….and reading 🙂
Thank you Morgan! I call this style a story poem, and I love writing this way! Peace to you and wonderful blessings my friend.
I’ve written a few narrative poems, but I don’t think they swept the reader up like this one 🙂 You should write more of them 😉
Thanks my friend! I think will!🙂
Your writing is exceptional and refreshing!
Thank you for your encouragement! What a blessing. Peace and welcome to my blog! Blessings.
You’re utmost welcome. I am so happy that I found your blog. 🙂
Thank you again, and welcome to my neighborhood!
Beautiful post, Nicodemas 🙂
Thank you Irene for your wonderful comment! Peace to you my friend and great blessings.
Thank you Nicodemas. Wish you peace and blessings too.
This made me smile.
Thank you Anna! It was fun to write! Peace to you and have a great week.
Like Anna, this made me smile too! I like that about you! Blessings.
Oh wow, thank you Lois! I’m humbled and blessed. Peace to you and rich blessings.