In the dawn over the lake, crows break the silence with their morning gossip,
as the steel grey slowly releases
the blue,
and the green of the shoreline.
I take another breath,
copying the dawn releasing
the worries of this world.
Spring bringing freedom.
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So beautiful
Thank you D.A. so much! Peace and wonderful blessings.
Many blessings always
🙂
Ah, this sounds so peaceful. The flow of nature, everything on purpose, and we are observers and at the same time make ourselves part of the scenery while merging with what is.
Thank you Erika for your wonderful comments! Peace my friend and beautiful blessings.
My pleasure, Nico. Blessings and a lovely day!
Peace my friend and blessings.
🙏
You wrote,
“copying the dawn releasing
the worries of this world.”
Perfect. 🙂
Thank you so much Sunnyside! Peace and wonderful blessings to you.
My pleasure – and blessings to you, also. 🙂
And That was a big sigh …
A piece that one not only reads but feels … 💕
Thank you so much Yiena for such beautiful comments! Peace and wonderful blessings to you.
Always welcome dear~ 🌸 Have a great day and stay safe~💖
You too!
A bath in nature in the dawn is refreshing the mind . Beautiful, Nico.
In friendship
Michel
Thank you Michel! These types of moments are special. Peace my friend and wonderful blessings to you all.
copying the dawn releasing
the worries of this world.
Absolutely beautiful!!!
Thank you Pragalbha! I hope I have your name correctly spelled. Your comments are a real blessing. Peace and wonderful blessings to you and yours.
My pleasure. Yes you spelled it right, thank you for the care 🙂
Peace.
I instantly loved that, too. 🌞
VVN
Thank you so much Valentin! Peace and have a great weekend.
Love your use of sensory language, especially the description of color.
Thank you Michele! I used colors more in the past so thanks for noticing them and the encouragement. Peace and wonderful blessings to you.
You are welcome, thank you for creating and sharing lovely images for us.
🙂
Beautiful 🙂
Thank you Soiba! Your comment is a blessing. Peace and blessings to you.
Beautiful!
Also I like the name of your blog and the idea behind it🌻
Thank you so much! Peace and wonderful blessings.
spring bring freedom…
beautiful 🙂
Thank you so much U-man! And welcome to my blog! Peace and wonderful blessings.
Beautiful introduction to the new season coming, Nico.
Thank you Lauren for your wonderful comment! Peace and wonderful blessings.
Beautiful!
Thank you for your great comment! Peace and wonderful blessings.
❤️🙏🏽
Ahhh…. simply lovely. Reminds me of early morning canoeing.
Yes, I didn’t think of that. A beautiful thought! Thank you so much Alisen! Peace and wonderful blessings.
Beautiful lines
Thank you so much Prathapan! And welcome to my blog. Peace and wonderful blessings to you.
wow this is beautiful! i love ‘steel grey’ vivid imagery !!
Thank you Poorvi! And welcome to my blog. Peace and wonderful blessings to you.