I was descending when the wind filled my wings,
eyes closed, sensing my spirit
going further than I had ever known
prayer shifting, balance
returning, but I knew the river
was never ending,
it was then my eyes filled
with tears.
I let go
of my talons.
Poetry and Image © Copyright 2017, ancient skies
Simply beautiful!
Thank you so much Kai for your awesome comment! Peace to you and be blessed.
Nice write and lovely twist at the end.
Thank you Joseph for your wonderful comments and encouragement! Peace my friend and blessings.
You’re welcome 🙂
Great ending!
Thank you so much! Peace and have a wonderful weekend.
Well said dear brother, may Allah remove all your tears and replace them with complete happiness and smiles.
Thank you Semra for your beautiful comments! Peace and blessings to you sister.
Thank you
Thank you also! Peace to you and great blessings.
Beautiful!
Thank you Connie! Your comment is a blessing. Peace and blessings to you and your family.
Touching, Nicodemas!
Thank you Erika! Peace and have a wonderful weekend!
Thank you very much and same to you!!
Oh, I really didn’t expect that ending! Love it.
Thank you D! Peace and wonderful blessings to you.
Your poem is a beautiful symbol.
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Thank you Michel for your encouragement! Peace my friend.
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Michel
Thank you Michel! Peace to you and your family.
Beautiful post!!
Thank you Leyla! Peace to you and wonderful blessings.
Wonderful all the way through creative.
Thank you for your great comment! Peace and blessings.
Really beautiful.
Thank you so much! Peace to you and have a wonderful weekend.
Beautiful words as always. Peace and Happiness. Love and Light 🙂 ❤
Thank you! Your comments are a blessing. Peace to you and blessings too!
Great potrayal of our winged friends.
Thank you Solitaire! Peace my friend and blessings to you.
With the power of my talons, Today I let go. :-)))))))
Very inspirational, thank you so much. 🙂 I needed this!
Wonderful! Thank you so much for your beautiful comments. Peace to you and blessings.